Ratifying Our
Constitution
After the
failure of the Articles of Confederation, America was in need of a serious
change. The wealthy and educated politicians of each state all agreed that a
new constitution was in order, however, the federalists of the north, and the
anti-federalists of the south, had their differences.
The federalists
believed in a strong, centralized government. Not too strong, of course, but
stronger than the articles of confederation were. Anti-federalists did not like
how this was going. They saw too much power in the government which would take
away the rights of the American people. Also, the American people felt as if
they weren’t represented enough in the decision making of ratifying the new
constitution. Only the rich and educated made these decisions and the poor and
uneducated were not represents well.
In the end,
the constitution was finally ratified, and it has been the major document
keeping our country together for centuries. It is not perfect, but it was
better than the Articles of Confederation by a long shot.
You make a few strong points but you're writing style was copy and featured a few major errors that detract from the price as a whole. Despite this you still make some very strong points.
ReplyDeleteWhat do you mean my "writing style was copy"? That doesn't even make sense.
DeleteI liked your points on the anti- federalists and federalists. I think you made a good summery of the whole ratification
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